have been working in college admissions for a really long time and have read thousands of essays. Today, I read yours and I loved it so much, I decided to stop what I was doing so that I could write to you. I laughed out loud – I loved the scene you set, your insight, your sensitivity. I have a complete and detailed mental picture of the parking lot, the neighbors, the tension. It was really fabulous. I then decided to show it to others on my staff and they all laughed in the same places, nodded in others, and handed it back saying, “Awesome.”
So, you have not only made my day, but you did so for a bunch of my colleagues as well!
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| Gender | Female | |
| Age | 30 | |
| Sexuality | Straight | |
| Location | USA, Virginia, Reston | |
