Writing Erotica Is Harder Than it Looks But I Gave It A Shot

It arrived like an arrow, a bolt from the blue, that defining moment when darkness was lifted and everything became clear. Those eyes that are so deep and yet so vivid that cause me to turn from the rational person I am into a gibbering wreck that will do just about anything to please her to make her happy and content.

An average day spent working and yet I can’t shake the image that is burned into my brain. The way she smiles and laughs with me when I crack my silly jokes making me realise that there is more to life and much more for me to enjoy. Never for one second did I believe that such warmth and feelings of absolute tranquillity could be reached with another person and yet here I am mature enough to know what I am doing and yet as nervous as a virgin teenager hoping for his first time.

Being a typical gentleman a cup of coffee is in order and some light conversation about the weather or something of that ilk gets the ball rolling and yet all the time I am feeling more and more under her spell. I can’t for the life of me stop trembling, why am I so nervous I have done this sort of thing before and yet my heart is racing and my fingers shake like they have a mind of their own.

We sit on the sofa coffee in hand talking. She is so close to me I can smell the odour of her perfume and it makes me feel good and slightly aroused which has never happened to me before resulting in a quickening of my pulse. Can this really be happening to me? I mean she is a fine looking woman, beautiful in fact and I never thought I would be so lucky to have her sat here beside me let alone notice that she is enjoying the conversation.

Suddenly she has stopped, and looks into my eyes. It catches me off guard and I completely loose my train of thought as she leans towards me. Oh please don’t let me be reading this wrong, I would hate to look foolish if I made an error right away, but I think she is closing in for a kiss. Her lips brush against mine, the tenderness of the moment leaves me breathless yet wanting more. It’s just a peck kind of kiss, at first, then another and then full on as her lips collide with mine and a longing that has remained buried for many years rushes to the surface. I bring my hand up and touch her face slowly moving it around her neck so that my hand is at the base of her skull as our tongues tie themselves in knots clearly fighting for supremacy of each others mouths. After what seems like an age we separate with no tongue a clear winner in this kissing battle and those powerful eyes transfix me again leaving me like a rabbit in her headlights.

She takes me by the hand and motions me to follow as she stands up and starts to lead me out of the room and heads for the staircase. By now my heart is, I am sure trying to escape out of my chest its beating that fast. She leads me up towards my bedroom, my inner sanctuary, my place of solitude and all I can do is watch her pert round bottom as it sashays up the steps and think of the potential pleasure that is ahead for us both.

I am so not good at this stuff. As far as my sex education went, it was something like this, “Son you know about the birds and the bees right?” “Erm kind of Dad” I replied “Good that’s ok then”, so as she lead me into the room I was so very nervous but she had this kind of easy relaxed persona that just meant that it all flowed so naturally.

Once inside my room the kissing started again only this time there was more urgency to it, like we were the last two people on the planet and we had to re-populate the species. The kind of kisses that make men like me so very erect and I guess from the dampness between her thighs, as my hand started to caress her; she was having the same positive reaction.

Needless to say it didn’t take much time before there was a heap of clothes on the floor and the pair of us had jumped into my bed. She laughed as I dived under the quilt and I flushed a little at the ridiculousness of the situation but I felt I had to explain to her that nakedness was never permitted during my last relationship. It was all very much under the covers stuff no revealing of the flesh. She laughed again and grabbed the quilt and threw it off the bed and though I was a touch embarrassed about it all I couldn’t help but laugh with her.

We lay together embracing as she reached down and I felt her fingers encircle my hardening member causing me to gasp at the shock as I caressed her pert firm nipples with my finger tips. Damn this lady knew what she was doing as after a couple of strokes the pre-cum had started to flow. She looked me in the eyes once more and calmly stated that there was no way that that was going to waste and giggled as she slid down the bed and ran her tongue around the tip of my hardness and gradually sucked me into her warm wet mouth. The sensation was so phenomenal that I couldn’t help but let out a guttural groan and almost apologised until I realised that my moaning had made her greedier and she engulfed my manhood taking in as much as she could.

After a few moments I had to stop her, there was no way I was going to cum early, I mean after such a long time since the last encounter I wanted to last longer so even though I was enjoying her pleasuring me I had to back away and slow the pace down. She looked at me perplexed as to why I had made her stop but I grinned and leant forward kissing her hard on her slightly parted lips and then started to butterfly kiss her down her voluptuous body, pausing for a linger at those heaving breasts and giving those pert responsive nipples a gentle suck. I must have found a pleasure zone because she involuntarily let out a gasp as my mouth closed around them and my tongue flicked at them one at a time as I was delicately sucking which made her body tremble.

Slowly I kissed my way down to her soft downy bush and then I could smell her scent of love and knew I had to make the most of this. She parted her legs further to give me access to her most sacred of places and even though I could sense her vulnerability I knew she was aching for my lips and mouth on her. I slowly moved in close and lightly blew on to her vaginal lips and saw the response as they seemed to pulse before me and a sigh escaped from her mouth. Very carefully I used the tip of my tongue to tease her labia occasionally catching her engorged clitoris as she pushed her hips up to meet my mouth. Finally I closed my mouth over her nub and sucked very lightly. The reaction was swift and almost brutal as she wailed and pushed her hips hard against my mouth, so much so that I could feel the rest of her against my chin as her hips bucked as I sucked and licked her. Her moaning was becoming incessant and I knew that she was getting close to the point of no return.

I stopped again and backed away, much to her annoyance until she realised what was about to happen next. She smiled and spread her legs apart and invited me inside. Resting the tip of my manhood against her sopping wet tunnel I slowly eased myself into her ensuring that I was looking into her now pleading eyes. She lifted her hips once again to take me into her only this time there was no need to be gentle I knew from the expression on her face and the wetness between her thighs that she was more than ready. Pushing forward my shaft slid inside her causing her to momentarily gasp for breath and then her pupils widened as I slid home.

Our rhythm gradually increased and I felt her ankles cross around my hips as she used her strong leg muscles to pull me deeper into her wetness. I knew that I wouldn’t be able to hang on for much longer I could feel my aching balls start to tighten, however I also knew that she wasn’t far off reaching her orgasm by the way her eyes were rolling into the back of her head and the gasps escaping from her sensuous lips. I enclosed my mouth around hers and our kisses mixed with the short breaths from our nostrils as the tongue battle resumed in earnest.

Then it happened, both of us reaching our inevitable conclusion at the same time, sighing, panting and moaning into each others ears as our bodily fluids mixed together, with her feeling me throbbing and me feeling her clamping her walls against my hardness our movements continuing unabated until we both collapse into each others arms, still kissing, still passionate and locked together in our embrace we drifted off to sleep.

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