So I'm new to this site but I love writing short stories, sometimes very short ones. Should I post the others? I've written about 10 so far. Would love some feedback, genuinely.
Lying naked on the bed, your wrists bound above your head, looped through the metal frame. Your eyes are closed because you want to feel every sensation if your body, although you couldn't open then anyway as you're wearing a black silk mask.
Depriving your visual senses only heightens the feelings in your nerve endings. You can feel your pussy getting wetter and tighter even though I've not touched you yet.
You feel the end of the bed sink as I lay on it. My warm breath on your skin, goose pimples pop up and your breathing starts to become more deliberate. Instinctively you pull your feet up towards yourself and let your knees drop out to the side. I know what you want and you know I'm going oblige.
Pulling myself up the bed, having barely touched you you feel my warmth on your clit. Extending my tongue out so my lips don't touch you, depriving your senses as much as possible. The tip flicks across your clit, a wave of heat spreads through your body, making you gasp, tense and relax, flicking your hips and wetness onto my lips, I lick then tasting your delicious scent.
Not able to tease you any longer, my tongue dives into your waiting hole, I can feel the sides of your pussy tighten as I try to push deeper, to taste more, feel more of you.
Licking, lapping, sucking your clit into my mouth and flicking the tip of my tongue across your engourged clit, a sensation explosion making you cum over and over. Taking every drop on my tongue I love your taste and want more! Xxx
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8:23 am Friday, 9th March, 2018
Also like to write stories but grammar not great if you want to no more or read a story drop me a reply . |
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4:16 am Sunday, 11th March, 2018
Please write some more x |
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11:05 pm Saturday, 13th April, 2019
You are an amazing writer 😍 |
